tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18463596.post3275235006906361971..comments2023-09-21T19:44:59.512-04:00Comments on Joy Leftow's Poetry Blog: my first try at tankaJoy Leftowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03700619411586350136noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18463596.post-88751794861879101992009-01-23T12:06:00.000-05:002009-01-23T12:06:00.000-05:00ah just thought to change the line, to I'm clueles...ah just thought to change the line, to I'm cluelessJoy Leftowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03700619411586350136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18463596.post-36580465179038691882009-01-23T11:52:00.000-05:002009-01-23T11:52:00.000-05:00I don't now what a tanka poem is but I do like thi...I don't now what a tanka poem is but I do like this one a lot, Joy.<BR/><BR/>Did you answer the trees?Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18463596.post-26459048795309557532009-01-18T09:41:00.000-05:002009-01-18T09:41:00.000-05:00Never heard of Tanka before, but I'm intrigued. Lo...Never heard of Tanka before, but I'm intrigued. Loved this, particularly the feeling it gave me of "if even the trees are confused, is it any wonder I am?"Willhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13625335820965303770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18463596.post-8915668051624952312009-01-18T03:51:00.000-05:002009-01-18T03:51:00.000-05:00Enjoyed. The trees outside are metaphored into ben...Enjoyed. The trees outside are metaphored into beng yu-know lost girls, IMO. <BR/>the trees <BR/>are confused<BR/><BR/>They ask me<BR/>If they should <BR/>bud or go bareKushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05153330074390558887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18463596.post-89605433359780356572009-01-17T18:55:00.000-05:002009-01-17T18:55:00.000-05:00Joy, enjoyed this one. I'm very new to Tanka and h...Joy, enjoyed this one. I'm very new to Tanka and have been trying some for the first time too. I like the animate-inaimate relationsship here -- trees and the narrator...absolutely intense... or are trees animate too!! But this poem is a very engaging one. Now I must get inspired and write some myself.:-)fleuve-souterrainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02671460507098082150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18463596.post-50738945006113226802009-01-17T15:16:00.000-05:002009-01-17T15:16:00.000-05:00It was good to read... I don't really know much ab...It was good to read... I don't really know much about Tanka :) but it was interesting.Zaira R. Sheikhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13733758018114462222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18463596.post-59358879592346746042009-01-17T01:10:00.000-05:002009-01-17T01:10:00.000-05:00Very interesting. Tankas and haikus are so sparse...Very interesting. Tankas and haikus are so sparse in words and so heavy with feeling - it makes them very powerful. I liked itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18463596.post-9903710484384809632009-01-16T23:45:00.000-05:002009-01-16T23:45:00.000-05:00:) This is a Tanka poem .I liked it .There are dif...:) This is a Tanka poem .I liked it .There are different ways to express one's emotions and I feel Haiku and Tanka are one of the best .short crisp and poignant .thanks for sharing <BR/><BR/>http://tikulicious.wordpress.com/2008/11/22/tanka-short-song/<BR/><BR/>read these and do read the other forms also on my blog .lvAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com